Tuesday, September 7, 2010

Life's circle now ends !

As she reaches the river bend,
Contemplating for it to end.
She dives beneath the water's icy skin,
Hoping the depth would wash away her only sin.
The memories flood back to her mind,
She ponders how on earth she was so blind.
Darkness comes to pull her away,
This is where her troubles will stay.


*This poem is written from the persona of a young child, a girl in particular who as made some wrong decisions in her life. The title of the poem 'Lifes Circle Now Ends' is visually represented in the picture as the reflection of the branches on the peaceful water creates the image of a circle and shows the circle of life. The water is personified in the third line as she 'dives beneath the waters icy skin' this show her feelings and moods as a scared young girl who trys to hide behind the waters icy skin.

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